>Maybe its a case of having raised my expectations too high. Tried to tell just how I felt reading. Hope You can see the constructive side and are not discouraged . All the Best!
I took your comments as constructive criticism. I appreciate the time and effort that you took to give that feedback.
I also appreciate all those who gave a Score by voting on the story.
I find it interesting that there are more "1" scores than "2" scores, and there are more "10" scores than "9" scores.
They currently average out to a 5.45 score.
I think if I can improve my writing enough then the voters that voted a "1" score (You Call this a Story!?) will switch their vote to a "2" score (Hated it) and the average score will finally break into the "6" score level.