>Engulf, your technical writing skills are first-rate, yet you have chosen to write a plotless tale of meaningless brutality and misogynistic depravity.
I will have to take exception to that. If you look really, really hard; you will see there is a plot in the story. LOL
>My advice: A bit more delving into the thoughts, feelings, and motivations of the various characters would add some spice to this tale.
While I also enjoy stories with lots of interior monologue, I am no Proust nor Virginia Woolf. Instead using psychological realism for characterization, I prefer readers to make their own judgements based on the character's actions and their interaction with other characters.
>Oh yeah, wanted to complement you on your "correction" of the Greek classics. I had belly laughs. It hurt, but in a good way.
Thanks, I had a lot of fun writing that part.