I read this to get some slave ideas and it sure didnt disappoint. Not my cup of tea because of the brutality but you wrote the scenes well and some were pretty damn hot. Dont let the votes get you down, write what you like and people will read.
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I appreciate the advice.
The scenes of over-the-top brutality of women have a purpose in the story. There are multiple themes that I am going for in the story, for example, the use of Technology to encourage some of the worst aspects of human nature.
In this story's dystopian world, brutality is one of the tools used for the dehumanization of women by a tyrannical government and a totalitarian society. Some of the literary influences for the story include Aldous Huxley's "Brave New World" and Margaret Atwood's "The Handmaid's Tale".