Hi Guys, thanks for the reponse to the story so far. I have added 2 more chapters today. It has been brought to my attention that there are some small mistakes that have annoyed some readers, detracting from the score. I was in to much of a rush when typing and obviously haven't got fresh eyes to look over it before posting. I apologise and ask if ther is an British editor that would be interested in helping i would be grateful. I have tried to iron out as many problems as i could find but i'm sure there will others i have missed.