I am posting again George5 and BarneyR are helping me.
I have now posted 2 stories from each of their edits.
I hope it doesn't insult them, but I have probably messed with them after their edits. Just remember, All Miss Steaks and Missed Stakes and Misteaks and mistakes are mine not the editors.
I am also writing some stories that will be a series. The series will revolve around the cheating cliches