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Funny Feedback

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I love feedback on my stories. If there are things I could have done better, I'm always interested in improving.

Sometimes, though the feedback is very funny. Today I got this:

"Her husband is not getting her ready for a job, he's pimping her. It is your story, write it as you will. I won't be readint any more of yours."

Maybe it was the tags which didn't do a good job of warning this reader in advance what the story was about. Here's how it is tagged:

Tags: Ma/Fa, Coercion, Reluctant, Romantic, Fiction, Workplace, Cheating, Cuckold, Sharing, Slut Wife, Wimp Husband, Prostitution

Hmmm... Yep, nothing in there indicates the hubby might pimp his wife out to his boss for a promotion.

I'll try much harder to be more explicit.

Bandor

 

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