Pixel the Cat, amazing person and editor that he is, went through my story The Upgrade with a red pen, sending it back bloody, (As he always does) but a much easier to read fairy tale, complete with mentions of frogs. It now looks to be written in a form of the English language and not my chicken scratch. I have re posted it, in its entirety. Partake if you wish.
Thanks go to Pixel the Cat, and those who read my work.