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For Hastings - Do you have a proofreader?

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I've been reading your current story "A New Life" and I keep seeing the word "power" where the word "powder" fits the context. I mean, the narrator is talking about 1800s weapons, and he says "... and power and shot for the revolvers...". I've seen it twice so far. A spell-checker program will not find this, since 'power' is a properly-spelled word. It's just the wrong word. You need a second pair of eyes to catch stuff like that.

(Oh, yeah. You seem to have all SOL feedback turned off. Email, feedback, reader comments, all off. The only way to tell you is a public shout-out in the blogs.....)

-ZM

 

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