Thanks for tall the comments and suggestions! I have made changes and decided to repost the first three chapters. For future chapters I hope to have an editor on hand to catch errors as well as make suggestions for changes. I will also begin posting new chapters twice a week. Not sure which days yet but once chosen they will be consistent.
Thanks to everyone who has taken the time to read my work, and to those that have taken the time to comment. I hope you continue to follow the story and I look forward to reading your comments.