I thank all who have messaged me so far. particularly Aardvark and, IliaV.
Support has been so supportive and comments have been so commentive.
Alright, enough piss poor attempts at humor.
In re-reading my story I have found that I may have slept through a few too many english classes. And I am fighting a losing battle against the gods of tense. I feel a constant need to bring the story to a present setting. However, present tense seems to lend an arrogant tone when I try it, so I am in the process of past-ing my whole story. sigh
but chin up. so far comments are that people like my characters, and are anxious to follow their exploits
May you always enjoy,
Kinky_Fun
PS [On hands and knees] PLEASE tell me if you want to see this story go in a specific direction - That one's for you J ;)