I have made it a habit to read each new chapter as it is posted, mostly to see what the end reader sees. I look for formatting issues and errors I missed.
Wow. Either I was phoning it in or I posted the wrong version of this chapter because I found four errors in the first couple of paragraphs. I am taking a quick moment to let you know I see them. Let me find ALL the screw-ups and I will have an updated version online soon.
Sheesh... just when I think it is safe to relax ;) Complacency is a bitch!