The second chapter of Patience should hopefully be up soon. At least if I submitted the chapter correctly.
I would like to thank the people who have been very encouraging of my initial story. I can only hope that you still enjoy the story after I have finished it.
I would also like to thank the individual who provided invaluable work in editing it, but I do not have their permission, nor am I sure as to how they would like for me to reference them. Still, without their help, this story would not be as readable as it is now.
Also ... Well ... I can't help but tinker. So, any problems that you see with spelling, grammar, etc ... they are mine and mine alone.
I have learned quite a bit about the writing process in performing this exercise. One of the most important things that I have learned is that I could have done more. I will need to spend more time working through my next story and hopefully make the characters feel more alive. Or at least more alive to me.
I hope you enjoy.