Thanks to readers who recognized this story as one I wrote on another site years ago I have taken it in a new direction which is getting traction with a lot of readers. In perusing the site I remembered writing the story and remembered losing interest. Because I edited it and posted the first chapter on SOL two readers gave me some pointers as to why they had lost interest. Taking that to heart I threw the old Chapter Two out and redirected into what they now consider a much more meaningful story. Thanks for the heads up.