I wrote my story Paradise to Prison story in a hurry and I was told as much more than once, so I finally had the story come to me demanding to someplace other than my mind. Well this is what came out to play. The new story is not that story simply re-hashed, but a similar story setup, with some of Teddy's good luck thrown in. It take place in 2018, not the 1970's. But child born and bred in the city, who has played at working on the farm as a child. I hope you like it, I did. This first chapter is longer than I normally post. I couldn't find a stopping point, I finally just stopped or I would still be typing away at it. Let me know if chapter is to put it to bed, or tell how Jeff fits into the simple life in Braddock, Texas. BUICK GS