I just finished a new chapter that I finished to close to X-Mas so I added to it through New Year's so it is a longer chapter. As always I was the last one read read and edit it after my team looked at it. So the flaws are my fault. These words written they way there appear to be pronounced as you see them Bidness = business, govment = government, Graey Fox = Gray Fox, Tre'= Tres and is pronounced Tray these things were indeed caught by my team, but they understood that I wanted them this way. I hope everyone enjoys this chapter as much as I did. I hope a few votes happen because the story was liked flaws and all. Working on a new Mack should be ready soon.