Fifty comments on my last blog post.
The score is 47-3 in favor of keeping on down the path of just a bit of an abnormal relationship that seems to be developing.
Folks, despite my best efforts to the contrary, sex creeps into my stories, and there's always the possibility that sexual creatures might stray outside the boundaries of the conventional mores.
B3elieve me, I write about girls **I** would like to meet. Deena, in Bill & Haley is a little bit young and a little bit adventurous and Haley may be just a little bit passive. What happened in Chapter 22 is going to continue to be a topic of conversation in Chapter 23 as conventional Haley comes to grips with the actuality of the event. She's got to think it through.
Bill and Deena will have to deal with the result. And believe me, folks, all the cards are not yet dealt.