Thanks for the comments on the chapters and even a few from the earlier books in the Energists' series. I'll try to correct any mistakes you point out to me and repost those chapters. I've already done that with the most recent chapters, as well as a chapter from Book 2.
I hope you are still enjoying this story. I've got a good start on Book 4, so I may start posting 2 chapters per week for Book 3.