First - the good news! Chapter 13, after almost a decade hiatus, is pretty much ready to go!
Second - the bad news! You won't see it for awhile. I don't want to get stuck writing a chapter and then rushing, so *all* of Invention II will be done before I post so much as one sentence to the site. How long? Uhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I don't know. In my head, there's likely another 10-15 chapters depending on length. There's going to be some major WHAT and OMG and YOU SUCK moments coming up. I consider it to be mostly a stroke story - but hopefully one with some unusual elements (the fact you have an indian girl who sprouted a penis after losing her virginity has to have some people wondering).
Third - the editing call. I've received several brave volunteers, and I've sent most of them copies of the work so far. And - really only one has responded back. I'm not stressed, because thanks to Zen Master he's given me some excellent feedback. But like all things, you get 100 people saying "Me me me!" and maybe one gets back with "Oh here's your reply."
Either way, I'll try to fix up mistakes in the previous chapters before I post the new ones. If I have my way, but the new year. No promises.
I'm honestly ok with the response so far. It's a non-paying gig to read about sexy girls being stripped naked while their bodies are flooded with a mind control system to make them so hot and horny they can hardly think of anything but sex. I mean - who'd *want* to read about that?
DP