I just put chapter 17 in for submission. This is the chapter that covers the next day, up to the beginning of the Christmas Party. There's a lot that happens in this chapter, from breakfast with Jane, through John's day and up to the introductions at the start of the party.
Thanks again go out to everyone whose shown their support, constructive criticism and been honest about how they feel about the story. I also want to take an extra moment to thank John and Justin for keeping my spelling, grammar and sentence structure legible.