Chapter 10 is submitted. I think it will satisfy some of the critics that think John's been submissively taking everything Barb and Brad have done. Yeah, you're right. Probably not. LOL
Thanks to everyone who's written with constructive feedback, whether it's been comments on the story, spelling corrections, criticism of John's choices to tough it out as long as he has or questions about his mysterious plans for the future. I try to answer everyone back and discuss the things that are uppermost in your mind. Fair warning though: I've had my fill of people sending me one line that says "What a fuckin pussy! He should beat the shit out of them both. Why don't you grow some fucking balls?" Those messages no longer get diplomatic responses. The last week or so, I've been a little more direct in telling them to fuck off. Yeah. I'm still getting at least one or two like that, every time I post. Such is life.