I've have made a multitude of fixes for various errors in this story. I'd like to thank Gordon Johnson and DaveT for their input. Gordon's eagle eye and Dave's technical knowledge have been invaluable.
I may have boxed myself into a corner, but I have already begun work on a sequel to this story. Where it will go and how it will get there are still under consideration. After all, LOAP was started with a different title and plot, then scrapped and started again. I hope I can find a path to a good read for my loyal fans.
Cheers,
Coaster2