An astute reader caught a mistake. It has been corrected.
Somewhere between versions two and three, I deleted a scene where my protagonist learns his future father-in-law had a misunderstanding.
I have replaced the scene as well as corrected a few minor errors.
If you wish to locate the addition, search for the word "misunderstanding." the first two instances of the word are what you want.
Also, I would like to thank my readers. With the release of chapter five, my story had more downloads than with any other single chapter. Currently, chapter six is 28 pages long, and I have more to add. It may prove necessary to split six into two chapters.