I finally submitted ver. 2-a of Not Living On ... etc.
I made many corrections and grammar changes thanks to the review 'FuzzyWuzzy' did on the story. There is little content change.
I can make a Zillion excuses why it has taken so long, but...
New chapters will be forthcoming but 'my girls' seem to set my free-time for writing behind things like shopping, BBQ, and other things sooooo...
Sometime we will take that cruise. BTW, 'Tom and Jerry' is a real 93' boat. It was docked at Bahia Mar until my friends got sick and tired of the hassles. They went to live in the British Virgin Islands instead, the BVI in the story.