It seems the last couple of chapter were better because I took more time to write them rather than just throwing some random words on the screen. One of my Editors had some family issues as did I. I will be writing over the holiday as next week is bowl week and well...... Return of the Mack is going to have sex in the coming chapters, but this one and the most likely the next one still won't contain sex. I am sorry if that turns some readers off. I will strive to do better just stay with me please. I want to thank bachgen for his help in making my work a better read. And to aerosick for polishing up what I sent to him. So that means any flaws that you see are my fault as I did add a word here or there as corrected the flaws that aerosick pointed out to me. BUICK GS