My apologies for the delay in posting chapter four. I wrote it in a hurry and made a lot of errors. I'm back to correcting errors as I write a scene. This seems to work better.
Chapters five and six are in work.
The prequel, Jonathan and Rachel, is about 6K words long.
The prequel idea started as my character notes, but it grew into its own thing. I like the younger Jonathan Schmidt and his new girlfriend Rachel Weigel.
Feel free to write with questions, thoughts, critiques, and corrections. Your input helps me a lot.
If you do write, and if you have a favorite scene, please tell me what it is.
lichtyd