The first complete draft has been forwarded to my editor. Avery, the sixth grader in pig tails, has really sped up his proofing, she is able to explain the big words to him, thus speeding his edit. There is a good possibility that his first edit could be complete and returned to me early in November.
The delay is a partly Avery fault, she has convinced Jim to take her out for Halloween, and according to her, the way he looks he doesn't need a costume.
The new chapter will be enlightening for my 41 Readers.
As always my Bunnies are doing well. The Barrett is still on standby for all Bunny haters.