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TFD: Update on Chapter Four.

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My original version of chapter four had several flaws. The flaws existed because I wrote the chapter's ending and forced the story to fit the ending.

The ending of the chapter is worth keeping, trust me.

Unfortunately, correcting the flaws is taking longer than I like, and chapter four will be delayed. I expect to have an updated version out to my beta readers within a day or two.

My beta readers are awesome. This story is better because of their efforts.

 

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