Zak: Blog

Guys I have started to edit/rewrite my story ‘How I became a porn star’. I have done chapters 1-5 so far and would love some feedback, please.

I heard that you're settled down
That you found a guy and you're married now
I heard that your dreams came true
Guess he gave you things I didn't give to you
Old friend, why are you so shy?
Ain't like you to hold back or hide from the light
I hate to turn up out of the blue, uninvited
But I couldn't stay away, I couldn't fight it
I had hoped you'd see my face
And that you'd be reminded that for me, it isn't over
Never mind, I'll never find someone like you
I wish nothing but the best for you, too
Don't forget me, I beg
I'll remember, you said
Sometimes it lasts in love, but sometimes it hurts instead
Sometimes it lasts in love, but sometimes it hurts instead

I would love to know where my readership is based and how many are male /female
please send me a DM with your sexuality and country/city

cheers

I only knew you for a while
I never saw your smile
Till it was time to go
Time to go away (time to go away)
Sometimes its hard to recognise
Love comes as a surprise
And its too late
It's just to late to stay (to late to stay)
We'll always be together
However far it seems (love never ends)
We'll always be together
Together in electric dreams
Because the friendship that you gave
Has taught me to be brave
No matter where I go
I'll never find a better prize (find a better prize)
Though your miles and miles away
I see you everyday
I don't have to try
I just close my eyes
I close my eyes
We'll always be together
However far it seems (love never ends)
We'll always be together
Together in electric dreams

IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHAT I WRITE DON'T FUCKING READ IT !