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The Warehouse - New Chapter

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Hi guys, first off i apologise that it has been 6 weeks since i last posted a chapter,sorry. I have had my time filled with various things in my life that has meant that my writing time has been severly restricted. Secondly i apologise that i am posting a new chapter without getting this chapter proofread, I wanted to get it to you as soon as possible. I hope you enjoy the next installment.

The warehouse - answering questions

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Hi guys , i thought i would post an answer to a question some one posted with reference to the amount of Charachters in the story and how involved it was. Also, a repeated comment about some of the grammer that has been missed. I hope to have some content ready within a week or so before anyone asks.

Thanks for your support, By the time we start Part 2 we will have come across 59 different characters, this will only increase as we get new arrivals at the camp but also means we wont see others. If you remember back in the early chapters the Warehouse alone will be able to house 100-150 people and this will be without the guests that come and go. As you can imagine, this will be an enourmous which to be honest, i'm not sure i can achieve and keep the story focused to the end goal. In the short term we have 4-5 chapters left on this part of the story. As to the Grammer element, some basics have been missed as well as to different types of the english language being used. I have done most of this book with the assistance of a proofreader and software. this havent been enough and for the next book i will be looking for someone to aid with editing as well as adding a second proofreader. Considering this is my first attempt at writing, i hope it hasn't spoilt the story too much.

The Warehouse - New Chapter

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Sorry for the delays guys, a busy time for me at the moment but the next chapter is in the queue.
When she came around, she realised that Jon was still lodged deep inside her and a big smile formed on her face, she then realised that she had been surrounded by all of 'Jon's girls'. She knew at that moment she was one of them!

The Warehouse - New Chapter

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Hi guys, sorry it's taken a bit longer than usaul but i have posted Chapter 28 this morning. it's in the queue hope you enjoy it
Thanks for reading.

The warehouse - new chapter

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Chapter 27 has just been put into the queue. I hope you enjoy.

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