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Today, I combined all of separate parts, of Chapter 85, Part 1, into my story. The adventures of Tim Bodge, at patreon.com/user?u=24811645. There are over 3,100 words for the first part 1. That is about where I would want each section to be. Today I'll read it and then go over it with my editor, then through an AI grammar checker, and finally back through the editor again. Then I'll read it to check whether it sounded right to me and was the way I intended it to be. I'll upload it at 9 p.m. EST today.
Then I'll start on Part 2. Tim will be setting the plan into motion and seeing how things work out. Hopefully, everything will go as planned. But you know that things can happen. If they don't, the story is dull. Now to figure out how to make things go wrong. What should go wrong? Any suggestions? Drop me a note at thodge1945@yahoo.com.
Until tomorrow, have a good day.

Yesterday, I started thinking about Chapter 85, Part 1, of my story, The Adventures of Tim Bodge. It's found at patreon.com/user?u=24811645, for $1.00 per month. 
So, Tim needs to come up with a way to meet with Kelly, the leader of the 2,102 people on Star Ship Gladiator 2. He knows he cannot just walk out onto Deck 3, where they live. He also knows that taking her away from there would cause trouble. 
So, he's thinking about using two of his team members. Pauline, who is a shapeshifter, and Connie, who can teleport from one place to another, do the work.
First, Pauline will change into a small white cat and place herself at the feet of Kelly. She's hoping to be so cute that Kelly can't resist taking her home. Once inside, Connie will teleport into the living room and kidnap her. 
That's it for today. I now have to figure out how this is all going to work out. I only need 600 more words to end Part 1. I will talk with you tomorrow.

I'm working on Chapter 85, Part 1. I'm adding a new female character. She can turn the temperature down. and without knowing it, she has the ability to turn things into blocks of ice. The problem is that Tim (the star of the story) cannot just walk out and say, 'Hi. He needs her to come to the bridge of the ship. She thinks the ship is a world by itself. Her race has been on the ship for over 900 years. She's only 31 years old. and the leader.
Now, figure out how to get her to Tim without the others of her race knowing.
I'll let you know tomorrow how Tim is going to do this.

In the next few adventures Tim will find himself looking at a new spacecraft. Along with a new female with telepathy powers.

Just posted Chapter 83 in full on my patreon.com/user?u=24811645 account.