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Thank you for your support and hope you are doing well. November has gone well. I've posted chapter 73 and am now reviewing chapters 80 and 81. The plot on these three chapters, revolves on pirates capturing fairies and selling them for their magical abilities. Tim and the girls discover the reason for the fairies' magical power loss. Chapter 81 To locate the king and the artifact for restoring the fairies' magical abilities, they go into a dark forest. There they journey deeper into the woods, a monstrous creature emerges from the shadows, roaring and snarling. The team braces themselves for a fight, knowing that no mechanical device will work against this otherworldly foe. With grit and determination, they stand their ground, ready to face this first challenge on their quest.
If you have questions: thodge1945@yahoo.com. I will try to answer them.
Thank you for reading my story.
Terry
I just posted Chapter 72. I hope you enjoy it.
Tim is traveling to a society where women rule. He is imprisoned. See how he contributes to turning things around.
From: cwsawyer
To: THodge
Subject: Re: The Adventures of Tim Bodge - Chapter 70
Message:
Chap 70
Deniece turned and said, “Get the kids up and Miss C is waiting in the shower.
Deniece turned and said, “Get the kids up, and Miss C is waiting in the shower; by the time you finish with her, breakfast will be ready.”
correction
Deniece turned and said, “Get the kids up, and Miss C is waiting in the shower; by the time you finish with her, breakfast will be ready.”
his reputation as a fearless Tim and skilled explorer.
Alturnative
his reputation as a fearless and skilled explorer.
Or
Tim's reputation as a fearless and skilled explorer.
I have changed the wording and am gratefully for your help.
Terry
I have finished writing chapter 80 and have now started working on chapter 81.
Tim is coordinating a meeting between Wendy and a Fairy. Tim is currently faced with the task of deciding how to effectively address the situation involving the prominent leader and the pirates. Then there is Sarha's sister ship.
I will inform you if anything else arises.
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