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So going back and looking at the first draft. Ouch. Clunkier than a troupe of pantomime ghosts. Ideas are sound, execution is okay-ish, but trying to tick too many boxes in one chapter. Over cluttered.
This means some rewriting, and that's not made any easier in that my main PC is about to go back into the shop to fix some rattling failing fans.
So for those who're waiting, 6 is coming, but it's being redone on a laptop that's showing it's age and gets upset when I look at too many things at once.
Annoying.
Neen
After a week of migraines got into this chapter today and it was still a little undercooked. Hopefully that's now fixed, so I'll check it over in a day or so and with luck it'll be out soon.
Neen
For those who worry, the tags that have changed for this chapter don't reflect the rest of the story, just Jim's memories of things he learned as a teenager. We all have our 'phases'.
Neen
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