Posted my first story to SOL. Hope you liked it enough to check this blog out. It's still early so I haven't gotten much feedback or any idea if it is any good.
As a first post I'm already seeing things I want to fix like breaking it up into more paragraphs. I took another read at it as I was breaking it up into paragraphs and fixed a whole bunch of grammatical and story issues. I hope I got most of them and the newly edited version reads better.
Anyway just marking the start of my journey and looking forward to your feedback.
