Thanks everyone who commented on or contributed proofreading/corrections to my story. I'm glad it's well received.
I have submitted another chapter to Make It Count just now, and it should be available to read soon.
If you haven't read my story Interface yet, hold off a while longer before you start. I need to fix the formatting and re-upload it, and I also need to write one or two more chapters to wrap up what I consider the first part of the story arc. It's currently marked as inactive and incomplete, and I intend to remedy that soon.
Cheers!