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Many years ago my writing mentor Ken Randall once told me that I need to 'show' the reader what is happening in the story, don't 'tell' them.
For instance, instead of informing the reader that the woman is turned on, show you that she is through her actions.
As I play around with text to speech tools, this becomes very apparent. Something about hearing a story being read, especially by a sexy woman voice, makes it even more impact full.
Using the text to speech, I have to change the way I write. I have to use real English words. 'Unnnnghhhhhh' doesn't work in the software. It's still a learning process and it's extremely time consuming to do, but I enjoy the new adventure.
If you are a fan of Taken Girls, I converted the first chapter as a trial.
//soundgasm.net/u/Justaw/
I'd love to know your thoughts..
https://soundgasm.net/u/Justaw/A-wifes-night-out
Let me know what you think.
I finally found a text to speech site with good voices. I've spent the last 2 days writing a short story and then converting it to audio. It's a SLOW process.
But, coming soon....
I was re reading Selling her Soul and forgot how much fun it was. I may come back to it actually.
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