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New Story - Her First Time

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I recently published Her First Time. It hasn't generated much comment so far. I have re-posted it to correct some errors that might have been distracting. I also moved it to First Time category. The title is a bit of a teaser because it isn't exactly a story of first time sex but a more complex story. I think is is quite hotl and the sex builds quite nicely I think. I hope more readers will try it and that they will send me their comments telling what they liked and didn't like.

So far, disappointed in the response.

Tell me why

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A Question of Rape, one of my stories received a number of low score votes. I really would like to know your reasons for scores of 1,2 or 3, since there were a lot of high scores, suggesting that some readers liked the tale. If you gave it a low score I would really like to hear what it was that turned you off. I would learn from your comments and perhaps improve future stories. Thank you.

Conclusion of My Mother's Lover

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The final chapter of My Mother's Lover has been posted. I hope the faithful followers of the story will think it ends on a high note of pleasure for the reader. I apologize for taking so long to publish, but for one thing, I thought that Chapter Eleven might be the right way to end it. But adding Chapter Twelve set the stage for continuing the story for those interested, to tell the tale of Sally, the girlfriend who figured tangentially in the main story. So, we shall see how I get along telling that interesting story too. Thanks for reading and thanks very much for your interesting emails and comments. It makes it worth the effort.

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