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Getting tense in here

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I got some feedback from both my editor and a couple of you that speaking in the present tense was a bit crazymaking for the reader.

The idea of writing in the present tense came from the first 5K I ever did. I wrote in a blog about it, using the playlist I had created to help me maintain my pace as a sort of outline for the post, and I found that it flowed better when writing as though I was writing about it in real time. However, a story is not a blog post, so I have made another editorial decision to switch to the past tense. Yes, I know the first two chapters haven't been fixed yet, they will be as soon as I can.

See you all on Saturday 6/8, when a little more drama comes into play.

Who is this guy?

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Hi all ...

Long time reader, first time author! Actually, I've been writing since childhood and this is a story I've been tinkering with in various forms for over ten years, dating back to when a friend of mine observed that there are no romance novels featuring a character with a disability.

My plan is to try and post once a week. This week is a bonus to get the story on the radar. Chapter 2 is in the queue, and you'll likely see the next chapter on Saturday 6/1 if all goes as planned.

Back to my long weekend. Enjoy!

 

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