Well, thanks to a reviewer I realized that my story is not quite 100% what I posted. I'm still trying to get the hang of what is needed on this site. But, I did want to pass onto my readers that the official book does have the proper new paragraphs with each different dialog. It appears to be run-ons here, but in both the word and web docs they are separate paragraphs. I am trying to figure out what to do so patience please and I'll try to get it set up so that it reads better!!
