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Chapter 8 has been submitted for posting and will hopefully be up soon.
NB! This chapter is different as it’s written from Becky’s point of view and probably won’t make much sense unless you have read the first 7 chapters. Hope you enjoy it.
BR Bill
Chapter 7 is submitted for posting. Hopefully it’s worked, only I’m travelling in another country at the moment and for some reason I’ve had to copy and paste the text instead of loading it as a plain text file. Fingers crossed.
Nothing but great comments on chapter 1-5, but chapter 6 has received mixed reviews. Becky taking control and humiliating her mother to the degree she did hasn’t gone down well with some, which is fair enough as everyone is entitled to their opinion, but the way I see it is so far Becky has only had the internet to teach her how to be a dominatrix. In chapter 7 (not finished yet) Becky isn’t soft by any stretch of the imagination, but she’s learning that she doesn’t have to be mean and cruel to get her own way, so maybe the next chapter will prove more popular. I’m enjoying writing this story and as with all my stories, I write each chapter with what’s in my mind at the time, which on the whole usually proves successful. Cheers Bill
Chapter 6 has just been added to the posting queue and should be available soon. Hope you enjoy how everything is developing
Cheers Bill
Chapter 5 is finished and ready for editing before being posted tonight or tomorrow depending on the SOL posting queue.
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