Hi there,
Yesterday I posted my first every story. I was nervous as hell, managed to make a few mistakes that I wouldn't have normally but, hey, I needed to break my author-virginity at some point!
So far I've had some amazing feedback and I'm thankful to those who took the time to comment. I'll take on board everything that you've said and try and apply it onto my new story, which hopefully will be done this week.
Thanks again!