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Grammar is passable, floor plans are loading. Yeaaa! Now the chase scenes make more sense.

Lazeez is the best. We are lucky to have someone like him running this literary circus called SOL.

Wish him good health and a Happy New Year. I know I do.

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Thanks to those who have taken the time to comment. The gentle and accurate criticisms are appreciated. The 'keep-it-goings' are good, too.

Sorry about the image thing. The admin/mod helped with the first set. Somehow I mis-instructed with the second or overcompensated. In any event, I claim ownership of any F.U.B.A.R.s.

If someone could tell me how to code .jpg info in a text document, my gratitude would be huge. Specificity is good.

I am grateful for all the work the mods put into this site. They make this thing work despite writers like me who keep them too busy.

I wish there was a preview function like the one seen when making a blog entry. Seeing what the story will look like before it goes live would make life less embarrassing. But if there is a full story preview and I haven't found, feel free to mock me without mercy.

Y'all have a crazy happy New Year.
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A reader commented politely and rightfully that the story had unsightly typos. I've corrected zillions. It is written in third person. The apparent first person instances are marked 'xxxxx' and intended to be that person thinking to themself. I hope that convention doesn't cause confusion. I plan to update as often as possible.
A floor plan will be added which should make movement through the brownstone make sense.

Thanks for reading

I've submitted a multi-chapter tale. Multi- meaning 7 so far. Forgive me if the chapters or formatting get weird. Chapters will be added. I hope to get that part right, too. If not, I'll fix it.

Assuming, of course, it doesn't make the kind moderators crazy trying to figure it out, and they allow it to be posted.

Disclaimer 1: No systems troubleshooters were harmed in the making of this story, but they might have been misrepresented, in a good way.
Disclaimer 2: Actual lingerie was tortured, abused and stained in the making of this story. Any and all textile anguish is intentional and in violation of several fashion conventions.
Disclaimer 3: Any similarity to any actual person or persons living or dead or undead is accidental and unintended. But if there is a similarity to an actual person or persons, they should consider themselves extremely lucky, so keep it to yourselves.
Disclaimer 4: All stunts were performed by professionals on a closed course. trying these stunts at home would attract the wrong kind of attention. Don't even think about it.

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I've written a story based on the Central University of New Town/Donna and Crysta/College Code of Conduct world. It varies somewhat from the original idea and is a little more hardcore-ish. It is posted there under a different name and has received mixed reviews, mostly due to the deviation from the central premise of that fantasy world. Then again, several liked it a lot.

If it is posted here, please understand that it is my work alone.

Talk to you all later,
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