Zen Master: Blog

I like to read. However, there are more things to read than I have time for. I have to choose what to invest my time in. Lapi, whoever he or she is, looks like an enjoyable author. He, she, or it has done some good stuff. However, people who read Lapi's work will immediately notice a desperate need for a proofreader. Unfortunately, Lapi doesn't have email set up on SOL. We can't send feedback. Lapi, do you read this? Your latest work has some issues in the teaser or description. If _that_ shows poor writing, who goes on to read the actual story?

...for immediate posting. The story is not done, but the 'reference work on how stuff in the Swarm Cycle works' part is done. The second half, "Squadron Command", will be more of a novel and less of an reference book. It's gonna be a while, though. I'm still at the notes-gathering stage.
-ZM

The US military has a phrase for when you get caught up in something and the world passes you by, making your efforts meaningless and obsolete. That phrase is "Overtaken By Events". The Titanic's room service may have been first rate, but it was OBE. TH just sent me an email saying that the whole thing was good. Why wait until Monday to start posting it? I've sent the first two parts to the submission queue. I'll automate the rest of them if I can figure out how.

Have I mentioned before that there is one person in the Swarm author's group who can tell me it's garbage, throw it out and start over again, even at this late date? Right, The Thinking Horndog, the guy who created the Swarm Cycle's shared universe. And, he's reviewing it now. Crap. I HAVE to listen to him if he says there's a problem. Keep your fingers crossed. Short of him pushing the Abort button, TFC will start to get posted on Monday.

-ZM

It's no big deal when your proofreaders notice some mis-spelled words, or a place you screwed up the grammar or punctuation. However, when they point out some plot holes you have to stop and think about it.
Okay, that's long enough. I've fixed everything they said and we'll try again.