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I am going over each chapter carefully. The early chapters I had just not fully relearned how to write. So I am fixing them up a fair bit and adding a picture here and there from within the game environment itself.
Enjoy and let me know what you think Your feedback is important to all the authors here at SOL.
Well, Chapter Six is sent, so give it a bit of time to be made ready by the Master of the Page. May his/her fingers never tire.
I have done a very heavy rewrite to chapter one. I also added a few screen shots that are part of the scene depicted. Building the sets is easy, getting the characters to cooperate, that is hard.
I have rewritten the prologue and added a few images of locations in the story. Enjoy.
No matter how many times I read a chapter, to myself or out loud, I still miss errors. Edit number unknown, Chapter five re-posted again. Now to chew in six some more.
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