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O.K. I don't get it. So here is my mini rant. I can truly understand if some one gives me a low score for Technical or Plot but when some one comes up with a really low score for Appeal I don't get it. The codes are there. If you don't like what the codes tell you about the story why read the story at all?
I also want to thank those who understood what the story was about and gave me a little better scores to even things out.
AND yes... Her name wasn't Ann but this was told to me as true happenings... although I doubt the blow job scenerio. I just think 'Ann' got so horny telling me the tale of her repeated spankings that she added what she wished had happened. Or maybe not?
I am sort of seeing 'Ann' now so who knows what else I can get her to tell.
Thanks to all.... Ron
I just finished Chapter 20. In the middle of typing a sentence the story took over and Jimmy's mother did something I hadn't planned or expected. I hope it is as much of a surprise to you, dear readers, as it was to me. I still haven't got a clue where this story will end up...or when.
I was about half way through Chapter 18 when I realized that the story was pulling Jimmy into the S&M arena which I am not entirely comfortable with. So... I am starting 18 from scratch. I have enough ideas for two or three more chapters. I have received a few positive emails about the spankings so I will continue with that venue. The big question at this point is wether Jimmy and Ms Baker will ever get together. Comments?
O. K. I finished Chapter 15 today. I can't help where this story is heading. It looks like Jimmy is turning into a spanko. For those that enjoy spanking stories I believe there is more to come. For those who don't...sorry! I really don't know how many more chapters are coming. Everytime I think I am writing the last chapter something pushes me towards yet one more chapter. When this story ends it will be a surprise even to me.
Someone brought it to my attention that the end of Chapter 10 was jumbled and unclear. I don't know what happened because the original text was fine. Something must have happened while or after the upload. Two different sentences were merged into one with many words gone completely. Anyway... I just uploaded that chapter again. Sorry for any confusion.
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