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I received more feedback on how much rushed chapter 6 was, so I doctored it up a bit hopefully for the better.
Ron
I received (so far) two feedbacks that hated the mm stuff at the end. All I can say is the story took me there. I usually don't read mm stories myself but this is the second story where it appears briefly. Just trying to vary my stories a bit, but as always you can expect incest and spanking as these are my personal turn ons.
Please keep reading...
Ron
As someone has already told me this chapter seemed rushed. I guess it was. I wanted to end this phase of the story so I could start the second phase.
This story has received the best voting of any of my stories. I guess I was afraid if I made Willy more aggresive (like most of my stuff) I might lose some votes.
So...being the coward that I am, I decided to leave Mommy's Boy on a high note so I can see how the voting changes when Willy becomes more aggressive and demanding in the next story.
Hopefully you folks will continue reading and I am sure you will give me your feedback...good or not.
Thanks...
Ron
I'm about half way done with Chapter 6. I regret that Willy is starting to lose some of his innocense.. but it happens to us all eventually.
I hope to get it finished and posted by tomorrow.
Once again.. Thanks for reading my stuff. And speciall thanks for those that provided feedback, both good and not so good. :)
Ron
Just uploaded chapter 4. This story is a bit different from my usual stuff but I am getting positive feeback so I will continue in this vein... at least until the story takes me elswhere.
Keep the faith!
Ron
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