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A couple more errors were pointed out and I've corrected them. Chapters 19 and 23 have been submitted for posting. Thanks again to everyone who let me know of an error.
I've corrected a couple of grammatical errors that Joel found. Thanks for catching them Joel.
Sorry about the extraneous line feeds in my original posting. The error was mine and I have corrected this. The reformatted version is now available. I've also corrected a minor error in Chapter 3.
Thanks to all who commented on this story. I have more chapters almost ready to go and hope to post one or two more in the next day or so.
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