Peter Duncan: Blog

In line with all of my stories, I have re-read, re-written, and re-edited this story. Upon reading it I was embarrassed by how loosely it had originally been put together. I apologize and frankly am surprised that my readers rated it so much higher than I should have expected. I'm happy with the rewrite in which I have made chapters shorter, thus five chapters instead of three. There is no new content worth mentioning. But the story reads much better. At the end, I have chosen to add a bit of Toby Wakefield history in order to bring the Toby Wakefield Universe to a close.

Thank you very much for your patience and loyal readership.

Kindest regards, Peter Duncan

I originally wrote this as "Office Party" and deleted it. I pulled it up again and thought it was worth rewriting, certainly better written.

I'm working on a third chapter but am not sure it's worth posting.

I posted this as a stand-alone, but after rereading the entire body of the work I decided to put this back in. Because it really fits. I have done a lot of editing so I am going to add the two chapters I took out some time ago. Thank you for your continued support.

Peter Duncan

I took this segment out of the original body of "Couple Sharing in the Faith" because I didn't think it fit the flow of the story. I have rewritten it and posted it as a stand-alone story.

After being given a heads-up about the double-dealing that Grover McClintock is doing, including having Pete cuckolded, Pete returns home, confesses his affair with Dotty McCord, and lets Lydia know that he is wise to her affair with Clint Murdock, the two have dinner, rent a short-term room at the hotel and work on getting their marriage back together.