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I 'may' have been too harsh on Lazeer/SOL. The scores on some minimal sex stories can get higher rating than a 7. I'll just have to make fewer mistakes on mine. Guess that means I'll have to take blame, Oh NOOOO.
Lazeer and the SOL staff do a job not many would or could do. Sure they may not be perfect, only a few of us are(joke). Gratz to them for the great job they do.
Thanks for reading Ginny. I'll post Ch 24 soon and then we start Part II. Score keeps going down, download keeps going up yet after you factor in the 5% high and low taken off there is not much other 8-10 votes from you readers. Should have marked it a 'stoke' story Ehh.
I'll take a break after ch 24 and see what I'm doing wrong with this story and try to make Part II more interesting for you, the reader or turn voting off on it.
Things change a bit in Chapter 25 of Ginny. A lot less emphasis on Detroit and more on the rest of the world. I guess seeing how 3% of the population that had 95% of the wealth lived, versus those other 97% had some impact on me.
Naked kids, living on the streets or on a mud bank, hoping to sell themselves and escaping the Police 'Death Squads' could make a few westerners think.
In the real world, food, water, a house or a 'Master' were luxuries. Electricity, education, a bicycle even were only a dream. In some countries, tourists were only allowed in 'secure' areas. The bodies, slaves, prostitutes, and servants were hauled away or shipped out to the high bidders.
Part II of 'Ginny' deals with only the more humane things in these places. When I said no one dies, I meant my girls, Diane, Erica and the leads like Trudy et al.
In RL Erica did die, a horrible death; young, alone and un-cared about. In the Amazon, not the book place, 1,000 year old forests burn to this day to grow food and kill off the natives still around.
Outside Manila, the hopeful, 'house keepers' wait to be carted of to some Arab country, Do they ever return?
The Golden Triangle still sources a lot more than drugs and arms. At 9 -11 some girls are deemed 'too old' to even bother selling.
Part III of 'Ginny' may start at Chapter 40.
Grats to all the award winners. Some have really great stories and I am happy for them.
I will update less frequently soon and make larger chapters, since some of my other stories and pens need to be completed also.
In Ch 20, Ginny gets some more responsibility, later her, Sammy and Michelle join Giselle in everything the models do.
Diane does not get Raul, but neither do I get Carmen. Opps a different chapter.
Yep Paul lost his company twice. The first time no money, no contract, more emotional, the second time he gets $10 Million for real.(Ch 16) When he marries Diane he gets half of something that will get much bigger also, as do Didier and Erica. The Countess is not 'poor' either. Thanks to Blake for trying to take Paul's side, I did not want you to worry about 'poor' Paul. He will not have to eat only peanut butter and jelly sandwiches all the time.
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