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Sorry about being away for so long.
1. Have big health problems and is ongoing. I was in and out of hospitals for the past year.
2. When I got home, I just had no inspiration to write. Just no motivation or ideas to work from.
I started reading some new books and my old favorite to try to jumpstart my brain. I'm planning a big move to a new residence soon so updates might be intermittent, but I want to start Strange New World again.
If anybody has read the first chapters please, I would like some feedback to get the ball rolling so to speak, so I know what needs work and what to improve.
Thank you in advance.
The latest chapter is up and I'm really looking for some feedback.
I know it took me a long time to get it up and posted, but i wanted to make sure I got it just right. It's the perfectionist in me. Plus, I'm working on 2 chapters at a time; and writing another long story in a different genre so I won't get burned out just doing one.
However, I'm really looking for real feedback and criticism to help me in knowing if I'm writing something interesting and grabs your attention to read more. A rating or a quick note would be greatly appreciated. I can't tell you how great it feels to get feedback on what I'm writing. Good or bad, I just want to know what I'm doing right, and what needs improvement.
Thanks.
Hi everyone,
I've gotten a couple of e-mails about getting a link to the original story Her New World by Leviticus. It's on another site, not on SoL.
For those who want to read it, it's here
It's in the Bondage section, just under The Valley series.
It's a very excellent story. However, you don't need to read it to understand Strange New World. All the exposition is in the first chapter. Still, it is a very good read, so enjoy.
Well, my next effort is finally up.
Sorry it took so long, but I was on vacation in California for the last couple of weeks and my travel computer went on the fritz, so I couldn't properly edit and then send this story. The first three sections are up. This is going to be a slow long one.
I hope you all enjoy it.
Just to let everyone know, thanks to the positive response to my first story, and the suggestions to write another one with Aaron and Chloe, I will write a sequel to it. The above title is not the real one. LOL
I am in the process of working on a couple of other stories right now. I have an idea of what I want to do next, so just be patient. I promise that the continuation will be worth the wait.
-K.
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