So I have continued to get some encouraging feedback and some good advice for the future. I can't believe that over 1500 people have seen my story, or at least that many downloads.
It sort of gives me a little high. That must be the reward most of the real authors here are looking for.
Thanks everyone for your kind words.
I just wanted to thank everyone who has taken a look at my story. I hope that my amateur mistakes didn't keep you from enjoying one of my life fantasies, lol.
Please feel free to let me know what I can improve on. I would especially like to hear from those who rated me lowly...I am curious if it was the writing or the story itself you didn't care for.
I am thinking about my next story, which revolves around an all nighters in law school with my sexy partner. That story will also be based on a real life situation, but again my fantasy of what I wish would have happened.
I am curio to see if my writing improves with a second try.