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god that's an horrid title. But it is 3 am, and I really shouldn't be posting but fuck it I want to. Chapters 1 - 7 are complete and posted in 1 part.
this is were it gets confusing the story has three parts (never listed anywhere) part 1 is chapter 1 and may reappear in a later chapter X. chapters 2 - 7 are all part of part 2 (not counting the flash back which is my first flash back)
There are clearly 10 loads that are part of the night .. the story. So far, we have "found" 3. So I have no idea how many chapters there will finally be as this is already so much longer then I planned. And so much longer then most of the stuff I write.
SO!!!! Why should you care?
Well if you're still reading this pitiful excuse for a blog, then you read my only other post and maybe you have helped out with feedback. (A few people have.)
Well its been great. And clearly something worked to change my writing. So lets keep it up and see where this takes us.
Happy Wanking you Pervs.
ok so they clearly don't like that story. lol.
dude, its dropping to a 3 and below. wow.
Soooo here is my wish, for all my stories as well as the shorts I post to Tumblr. I want feed back.
Normally I get 1 - 2 messages per story every YEAR saying something like "oh god that was hot, that made me so hard."
Or I get "learn how to write."
But I get no feed back as to anything about the story. Was it boring, short, long, original, vanilla, kinky, full of spelling errors, gross, etc.
Feed back me folks.
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